I think the shading is lame. I guess the green is too zesty...don't you see the tones? I hope I get in. I wanted some crits from SRONists rather than crits from morons that usually says, "the color of that line doesnt match the dog. i think black is better." Blahblahblah
Oh, who's this? Its Yukari, some arctic wolfy. What's that thing from the back of her head? Oh, that's just a clump of hair.
Hmmm... this is really nice, but I think that the shading could've been more dsrastic. The legs are also wayyyy too long. It looks like it's part of your style, but it looks way too unnatural. Also the left front leg is bent forward a bit. Canine legs do not bend like that. Also, back legs of dogs do not have dew claws, and the dew claw on the front leg is too high up.
Lol, sorry about all the crits, I'm sorry if I seem harsh, but anywayssss, this is really nice, although there is much you could do to improve.^_^
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Lol, sorry about all the crits, I'm sorry if I seem harsh, but anywayssss, this is really nice, although there is much you could do to improve.^_^
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